Monday, February 2, 2009

Project 1 Sketches


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Layout 4


















Layout 5







Structure 1
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Structure 4













Structure 5
















Structure 6

5 comments:

  1. I like #1 and #3 the most because it's simple, clean, and the composition of the element is just right. But for #3, I'm not too sure about the vertical type treatment. It might be difficult to read when it's finished.

    Overall, they look good. =)

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  2. Layout one and two are nice compositions. Showing the vegetables will be a good sale because customers will notice the fresh veggies and think know that they have a good brand.
    As for the packaging, I don't think that putting something that's liquid in a paper container is a good idea. Glass or plastic would work best.

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  3. I like structure #5, it is a unique resolution for spaghetti package. And, I like layout #5, it creates a sense of freshness of a product. Regarding the paper structure for sauce, I agree with one of the comments that have been made before; I think plastic or glass container would work better.

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  4. ok as far for the layouts i like layout number three it's very clean cut and vintage looking i like the feel of it it's very "rustic" "italian" feel. i think you should do layout 3 with structure 5 the package and design combo i think would look interesting it would have a "rustic italian" label but a contemporary box which will make it stand out and be more eye appealing.

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  5. I am really liking layout two, with the more organic "scribble-style" illustrations I think it would look really neat! It would also give it a more gourmet look, which will help elevate the look of the box next to boxes of brand spaghetti.

    I like the prism style box for the spaghetti noodles.

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